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The view of being rich As the matter of fact, being rich is a skill. As is known, everybody is different in the word, which tells us not only do we need to go all out in work, but also we need skill and opportunity. Partly speaking, the specific goal is very significant. Specific goal is the only shortcut to success for us. Judging by the increasing of the word’s billionaires, the number of rich people is so huge, which obviously hints that economic development is very fast. So we should learn how to hold the chance. It is more important for us to study. Maybe the rich people are so much in china at present. But we have to believe that being rich is very difficult. Moreover, Chinese girl’s triumph illustrates family background is also significant. After all, the girl is the daughter of Logan’s chairman and CEO. We have to admit it. More importantly, the girl’s own effort is necessary. To sum up, if you want to success, you must own a lot of abilities. In fact, rich people are universal in china. And the government agency should encourage the people to do good deed, which can shorten the gap between the rich and the poor. After all, being rich is only a concept ,not a standard, is not it?

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The view of being rich

As the a matter of fact, being rich is a skill. As is well known, everybody is different in the word, which tells us that not only do we need to go all out when it comes to in work, but that we also we need both skills and opportunities skill and opportunity. In part Partly speaking, the having a specific goal is very significant. Having a specific goal is the only shortcut to success for us. Judging by the increasing/growing number numbers of the world's word’s billionaires, we can probably say that there is rapid economic growth. OR The growing numbers of rich people obviously hints to a fast/rapid economic development of some sort. the number of rich people is so huge, which obviously hints that economic development is very fast. So we should learn how to hold the chance (hold the chance is not commonly used. Perhaps, take the opportunity).


It is more important for us to study. Maybe most of the rich people are/can be found in China the rich people are so much in china at present. But we have to believe (or are/were taught to believe?) that being rich is very difficult. Moreover, a Chinese girl’s triumph illustrates that having good family background is also significant. After all, the girl is the daughter of Logan’s chairman and CEO. We have to admit it. More importantly, the girl’s own effort is necessary.

To sum up, if you want to success, you must own/possess a lot of abilities. In fact, rich people are universal in China. And the government agency should encourage the people to do good deeds which can shorten the gap between the rich and the poor. After all, being rich is only a concept ,not a -standard - isn't it is not it ?

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