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Could you please correct it . I have an exam tomorrow :( I can't enjoy watching programs without having pizza. I'm really into it . Specially when I have it with a cup of soda fall of ice in it. Regardless of what pizza has been influenced on my stomach , having it during watching Tv shows, makes me over the moon. Without eating it , my enjoyment will be less.There are many types of pizza but what I like it the most is a vegetable one. My favorite pizza that I addicted to is a vegetable pizza. I always order it form a near restaurant of us. It's meddle , its shape is circular in a red square box. have a triangle slices. When it arrive , I get so excited while I'm holing it . I can feel its hot by my hands. It's really makes me want to bite it with its box. As soon as I open the box,it looks delicious. It smells spices, oil and garlic. It's so colorful like crayon on paper. From this moment since I opened the box , my job is began now. It's time to turn the tv on , pick one piece and say in the name of God we began. The first slice always be different. It's soft and hot . the cheese on it as chewy as white yarns . It's think and a little bit heavy ,which makes holding it is a bit difficult. It's taste spicy sour. It's so crunchy while in eating it. I close my eyes and keep saying umm umm so tasty. When my tongue get burn because of the spicy , I immediately drink after it a cold soda and I feel really good. The best pizza for me is vegetable one. It has a different taste of the other types. It's a plus of my interest while I'm watching tv programs. That would be less if I dont have it .

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Could you please correct it . I have an exam tomorrow :(

I can't enjoy watching programs without having pizza. I'm really into it . Especially when I have it with a glass of soda with ice.  even though it upsets my stomach, , I really enjoy it when I am watching tv. Although there are many different kinds of pizza I find vegetable pizza the best. I always order it from a restaurant near us. It is circular shape cut in triangle slices and it comes in a red square box. When it arrives I get so excited, I can feel the hot pizza through the box, I feel like biting through the box. When I open the box it looks delicious, I can smell the spices, oil and garlic. It's as colorful as crayon on paper. Now it's time to turn the tv on, take a piece and thank god. It is soft and hot, the cheese stretches into long strings, it's thick and heavy and hard to hold onto. It has a spicy, sour taste and so crunchy that I close my eyes when I am eating it and keep saying umm umm so tasty. I take a drink of cold soda to take away the spicy burning on my tongue and it feels really good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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