About my aunt!

About my Aunt

My aunt, who is my father's sister, (It should be a non-defining relative clause) were got the traffic accident since 20 years ago. She is still living in the Shabby house in the village. And she has been living there for about 20 years from the day when she was caught in the accident. (You don't "get the accident". You can be "caught in the accident or injured in the accident") You can't imagine how terrible her life is ! Her house which is filled with dust. A black-and-white television were put in the living room and the light  light pipe was broken. You just could see something from the light of the bedroom . When I get into the bedroom ,I saw that she was reading (In English, you "read" not "look") a book of geography. Though the weather was cold, she was wearing fewer clothes than she should. I held back my tears. My another aunt asked her whether she felt cold or not.She replied loudly:"I don't feel cold." My aunt just can speak the words in loudly because her vocal chords was impaired by the accident. (Please remember: you use "because" in front of a sentence while you use “due to" "because of" in front of nouns, pronouns, gerund) Then,my aunt grabbed her hand and felt cold.When she saw my father,she could call my father.She remembered my father and my aunt and even knew who I was. (Please pay attention to tense agreement) This is the second time I saw her, and the other one was from when I was younger. The quilt (you wanted to say beizi, didn't you?) of the bed was filled with dust and it looked old.It must have not been washed for a long time. Since 20 years ago, my home is not village,and my grandmother have six children. When she got the accident ,we paid all the money to cure her. Unfortunately,She could not walk any longer . Therefore, she needed to be look after. But,her brothers or sisters all needed to work. After a few years,she was married to a men who could look after her that we are looking for. But,actually that guy was bad and just wanted to look for the money that we paid him. I sat with a smile on the bed. I even could feel that she must a pretty girl when she was young from the pure look from her eyes.She had a pure and stainless heart. 20 years , it is a long time.I can't imagine what life she is living.Though she has suitable the life.I can't compare the life between she and us.How happy life we have. We need to value our life.Finally,I just hope my aunt can still face the life with a smile. We should spend more time to take care of her.I also need to do an introspection (What do you mean by saying this?) to her.

Look, I feel very sorry for the misfortunes that your aunt has been through! That's why you need to keep on working hard and be the man who can take care of your family, your loved ones, and you friends.