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1. I have two cats. 2. Name of first cat is Johhny like Johhny Depp 3. And name of second cat is Sheldon like Sheldon from The Big Bang Theory. 4. Cats are very cute but very noisy because they play each other very hard . 5. They run one after another and bite each other. 6. On one side two cats it`s good because they don`t feel lonely. 7. But two cats it`s more wool at the apartements, on the clothes and sometimes in your mouth. 8. They`re two good boys especially when they`re sleeping.
Here you can see my cats: http://cs425429.vk.me/v425429512/90d9/DVtl8ph4fOs.jpg
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MY PETS
1. I have two cats. 2. The name of the first cat is Johnny, like Johnny Depp 3. And the name of the second cat is Sheldon, like Sheldon from The Big Bang Theory. 4. Cats are very cute, but very noisy, because they play with each other very hard. 5. They run one after each other, and bite each other. 6. On one hand, having two cats is good, because they don`t feel lonely. 7. On the other hand, having two cats means more wool in the apartment, on the clothes, and sometimes in your mouth. 8. They`re two good boys, especially when they`re sleeping.
You can see my cats here: http://cs425429.vk.me/v425429512/90d9/DVtl8ph4fOs.jpg
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