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Could you "An English native speaker" give your touch correting this entry? :) thank in advance About us ___________ Tarjim.Loghat is a student activity at the faculty of languages and translation / Al-Azhar university which aims to help everyone who is interested in translation by organizing events about translation field and its tools , and helping everyone as possible as we can by providing you by everything you need that is related to translation. __________ ____________ ________________ Tarjim.Loghat opens it doors to those who are interested in helping others and improving their translation skills by joining any of our committees which are; H.R committee Academic committee P.R committee Funding committee Organization committee Media committee _____________ __________________ _________ You can register by filling this application https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1XfFRE5MOwKEU9pV1Iu3dNalxP2lFm9j0e0zTmAkJ92o/viewform ___________ ________________ _____________ For any information or questions you can call

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Could an native English speaker correct this entry? :) Thanks in advance.

About us
___________

Tarjim.Loghat is a student activity in the department of languages and translation at Al-Azhar University which aims to help everyone who is interested in translation by organizing events about the translation field and its tools. 

We try to help everyone we possibly can by providing you with everything you need that is related to translation.
__________ ____________ ________________

Tarjim.Loghat opens it doors to those who are interested in helping others and improving their translation skills by joining any of our committees which are: 

H.R committee

Academic committee

P.R committee

Funding committee

Organization committee

Media committee
_____________ __________________ _________

You can register by filling out this application

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1XfFRE5MOwKEU9pV1Iu3dNalxP2lFm9j0e0zTmAkJ92o/viewform

___________ ________________ _____________

For any information or questions you can call

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Here's how I would change this to be more readable..

(Took out 2nd sentence because it did not really add value..)

 

About Us
___________

Tarjim.Loghat is a student activity group at the Department of Languages and Translation in Al-Azhar University. Their purpose is to help anyone interested in learning about translation by organizing events about this field and the resources available.


__________ ____________ ________________

Anyone interested in helping others to improve their translation skills is invited to join any of the following committees:

H.R committee

Academic committee

P.R committee

Funding committee

Organization committee

Media committee
_____________ __________________ _________

Please register by filling out this application -

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1XfFRE5MOwKEU9pV1Iu3dNalxP2lFm9j0e0zTmAkJ92o/viewform

___________ ________________ _____________

For any other information or questions please call ...

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Could "a", not an. Sorry about that!

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