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please help to correct my writing, thanks: Technology: Does it simplify life or makes it more complicated?
People have said that we are living in the century of technology. A lot of equipment and tools are being created and people are using them every day in their life. Some people think that it makes everything more complicated. From my point of view, I believe that technology simplifies life and makes it more comfortable. There are some reasons to let me think like this.
First of all, technology created mobile phone networks that help us to connect easily everywhere and all the time. We can do business, make an appointment, ect … and we don’t need to wait a long time to get responses. We can do things very quickly and save our time. It makes our life more simple.
Secondly, we can travel to Europe or any countries by airplane. It is a product of technology. If it takes 2 days to travel to a 1000km distance by bus, with an airplane, it just takes 2 hours; it is more convenient than the bus.
Lastly, there are a lot of home utilities that can be solved by technology. For example, we are using washing machines, air-conditioning, fridges, etc … at home. These tools help our life be more convenient, and we can have more time to enjoy our wonderful life.
It is apparent that people are using more and more outputs of high technology to help their life be more convenient. In the future, technology will develop more, and people will do things to make life more simple. And simple is the best.
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