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Neighbourhood Report The aim of this report is to make recommendations to spend money which will improve the neighbourhood where I live. There are three issues very important to change: the citizen security, more sports areas and modernise the neighbourhood´s aspect. The Citizen Security This is a matter very important for the citizens because in the last years the delinquency has increased here. In fact, there was an explosion of a bank, many fights between gypsy families with the result of some killed person and also every week there are robberies in the new supermarket. Sports Areas There are few sports zones and the most of them are damaged. It necessary have a healthy population with people interested in sport, in this way it is probable that our teenagers have a better future and our old people can be more active. Modernise the Neighbourhood´s Aspect Delicias is one of the oldest neighbourhood of the Valladolid city so our streets are extremely rundown and very narrow. Sometimes the elderly have falls and the handicapped cannot go through the town because this is not adapted. Recommendations I recommend that the town council should make some changes with the large amount of money available. Although there is a police station in the neighbourhood, we should have more policeman in our streets to we feel more protected. On the other hand, I would spend the money in sports parks for cycling, running and other places with sports pitches. Finally it would be important to renew the streets making them wider and suitable for all citizens.

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The aim of this report is to recommend the best method to allocate the available finances, which will in turn improve my neighbourhood. There are three issues that are very important to change: citizen security, sporting areas, and modernisation of the neighbourhood´s aspect.

Citizen Security

This matter is of high importance for the citizens because in the past years delinquency has increased. In fact, there was bombing of a bank. There have been many fights between gypsy families, which resulted in a death. Also, there are weekly robberies in the new supermarket.

Sports Areas

There are few sports zones and most of them are in a poor condition. It is necessary to have a healthy population with people interested in sports. In this way, it is more likely that our teenagers will have a better future and our elderly can stay active.

Modernise the Neighbourhood´s Aspect

Delicias is one of the oldest neighbourhoods of Valladolid. Therefore, the streets are extremely rundown and narrow. At times, the elderly have fallen and the handicapped are not able to pass through the town because it is not well adapted.

Recommendations

I recommend that the town council should pursue positive changes with the ample amount of finances at their disposal. Although there is a police station in the neighbourhood, the town should have more policemen in the streets. This will increase the feeling of security and protection. On the other hand, I would suggest spending the funds on sports parks for cycling, running and other areas with sports pitches. Finally, it would be important to renew the streets making them wider and more suitable for all citizens.

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