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I'm looking forward to making language partners!!!

I'm looking forward to meeting new language partners!

My English name is Brandon and I am from Korea.

Now, I'm studying English for 5 months in Minnesota, also I really want to improve my English skills.
Currently, I'm studying English for 5 months in Minnesota.  Also, I really want to improve my English skills.

So, I want to make a language exchange partner like a tutor.

So, I want to meet language exchange partners who will tutor me.

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So, I want to meet a language exchange partner who will tutor me.

I'm looking forward to finding (making) language partners!!!

My English name is Brandon and I am from Korea. 
 
 (Now,) I'm studying English (for 5 months) in Minnesota for five months and (, also I) really want to improve my language (English) skills.

So, I want to find a (make) language exchange partner, such as a (like) tutor.

I'm looking forward to meeting new language partners!

My English name is Brandon and I am from Korea.

Currently, I'm studying English for 5 months in Minnesota. Also, I really want to improve my English skills. So, I want to meet language exchange partners who will tutor me. 

I'm looking forward to meeting language partners!!!

My English name is Brandon from Korea.

Now, I'm studying English for 5 months in Minnesota, also I really want to improve my English skills.

So, I want to make language exchange partner like tutor.

I'm looking forward to making language partners!!!

My English name is Brandon  I am from Korea.

Now, I'm studying English for 5 months in Minnesota, also I really want to improve my English skills.

So, I want to make language exchange partner like a tutor.