A Rainy Day

Today I went to one of my roommates' houses with two others and she cooked a delicious meal for us. Although it rained so heavily and I got a headache on the bus which led to my vomiting on the way, most of the time was pleasurable. I even tried to cook a dish which is my hometown's specialty. We all got stuffed before finishing all the dishes. Afterwards, we hung up around the suburb in Hangzhou and went shopping at the square.
Now it's late in the evening and I am so tired that I must go to bed...

((A good entry with nearly perfect grammar. Try to use 'meals' instead of 'dishes', though, since a 'dish' is more often used to mean a 'plate'))

A Rainy Day

Today two of my friends and I went to the home of one of my roommate's house with other two one and she cooked a delicious meal for us. Although it rained so heavily and I got had a headache on the bus which caused me  led to my to vomit vomiting, on the way, we enjoyed ourselves.most of the time we really passed with big pleasure. I even tried to cook my hometowns' speciality disha dish which is my hometown's specialty. We were to full to finish all the food.all got stuffed before finishing all the dishes. Afterwards, we hung up out around the suburb in Hangzhou and went shopping at the square.
Now it's late in the evening and I am so tired that I must go to bed...