Fashon show
Yesterday,I'm going to fashonshow.That show name is [DREAM].I am model.I'm walking in the runway.I'm so nervas!!!! But I con't forget this event. Because this is my firsttime of model. I hope one more time!!!!!!!
Thank you:)
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Fashon show
Yesterday, I was in a fashonshow. The shows name was [DREAM]. I am a model. I walk on the runway. I was so nervous!!!! But I won't forget this event, because this was my first time to model. I hope to do it again!!!!!!!
Thank you :)
I hope I corrected this right. I wasn't sure if this was future or past tense, you stated by saying yeaterday however many of the words implied the event had not happened yet. My corrections were assuming past tense though so I hope I was right.
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