IELTS: writing task-1 Hello everyone could somebody help me to check my writing? I'm taking an exam on March 15. So I would be very grateful for your help. =========== The graph and table provides amounts of worldwide usage of water and its expenditure within (the scope of) two different countries in km3 starting from the year 1990 to 2000. The graph reveals that global water usage rates between the years of 1900 and 2000 sow a dramatic increase for all three sectors starting at 500 km3 in 1900 reaching the peak of 3000 km3 in 2000 for Agriculture branch, from approximately 10 km3 in 1900 increasing gradually to 1000 km3 for Industrial and to roughly 400 km3 for Domestic sectors respectively. Between the years of 1900 and 1950 the figures of Industrial and Domestic branches remained stable beginning to rise slightly/gradually after 1960 until the end of the period. The rising trend was more rapid for Agriculture sector showing a significant gradual increase over the whole period with a bit higher figures in 1960 falling slightly in the following decade but continuing stable grow. To sum up, it is clear that water usage for all sectors begin to grow enormously after the late 1950s. Considering the table, it compares water expenditure between two countries Brazil and Congo in 2000. In 2000 Brazilians used almost 2 m3 per person with population of 176 million, state territory at 26,500 km2 and water usage at 359m3, comparing with approximately 1,2 m3 of water per person Democratic Republic of Congo which is much lower than Brazil even in terms of the state population of 5,2 millions, state are of 100km2 and water usage of 8m3.