First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone!My name is Jody.I'm a Chinese girl.I love dogs very much. I want to learn English well so that I can communicate with some foreign kennel [Do you mean dog breaders or enthusiast associations? Kennels don’t talk].I also like travelling and making friends with others,so I think English is very important.I want to have some friends and we can learn from each other.I can also show Chinese culture to you.

Good English. If you write in Microsoft Word first and do spelling and grammar checks, it will show your punctuation problems. You have no space after the commas and full stops (periods).