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Anti homosexuality law in Russia.
Artur is a young boy from Russia. He had to face different kinds of violence in his country just because he is homosexual. One of the worst laws of Russia is one law that is against homosexuality. He complains, because* Human Rights can be violated in a large proportion. He has been a* victim of anti-gay groups,* suffering many injuries,* both physically and psychologically.
He is optimistic and has hope* that things will change in his country. He is still young, so he has a lot to learn, and many more mistakes to be made,* but with freedom, happiness and not discrimination by people.
Please, correct my mistakes.
Hopefully I did a good job :-/ I'm not perfect with punctuation hahaha but my vocabulary is really impressive jajaja
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Artur is a young boy from Russia. He had to face different kinds of violence in his country just because he is homosexual. One of the worst laws of Russia is one law that is against homosexuality. He complains because, Human Rights can be violated in a large proportion. He has been victim of anti-gay groups suffering many injuries both physically and psychologically.
He is optimistic and have faith that things will change in his country. He is still young, so he is allowed to make and live many things in his life but with freedom, happiness and not discrimination by people.
Please, correct my mistakes.
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