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The soccer and society This sport is one the most important in the world, it entertains many people some people watch the matches and enjoyed with family or friends, they are feeling with passion when they see the team of the other country, old and young enjoy soccer, although, is a sports of men many women also like soccer, some people see the soccer as a business, we are going to see people act as fans of sports the most important in world. This sports have a team of 11 persons or more and could to represent a company, a village, a town, or a country and people always want that the team win the game, people lives this games with a feeling of passion, they cry out, smile, cry, jumping and when this happen people going to celebrate, they sing, they are happy but when the team lose the game many people act with violence and they start to fight with other people, they begin to destroy the shops, break windows, furthermore, this fight have left several died, is good enjoy but no let that it things happen. On the other hand are people that have this sport as business, the soccer give a lot of money with the publicity with the emission for tv, things sports, etc. People want to buy the t-shirt your favorite team, they want to have the flag and other things, the companies want that the t-shirt of players have publicity, the companies most important have publicity where they play soccer, for that reason, the soccer offer big winnings just a few people, likewise, players become famous and start to win a lot of money, for example, Lionel Messi win 76.692.000.000 by day, he win 210.115.068 Pesos and a worker normally by month win 1.000.000 pesos in the world, we have things crazy as this. Many families haven't food, many child haven't as dress, etc. In conclusion the soccer is a sport important but show me all disadvantages, inequality that exist in the world many people with a lot of money and other with a few money.

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Soccer and Society

This sport is one of the most important in the world; it entertains many people. Some
people watch the matches and enjoy them with family or friends.  They
are excited when they see the people in the other countries, old and young
enjoy soccer. Although, it is a man's sport,  many women also like soccer. Some
people see soccer as a business. we are going to see people act as fans of
sports the most important in world????. This sport has a team of 11 players or more
and could  represent a company, a village, a town, or a country and people always
want their team to win the game.  People experience this games with passion;
they cry out, smile, cry, and jump. When their team wins, people going to celebrate;
they sing, they are happy but when the team loses the game many people act with
violence and they start to fight with other people, they begin to destroy the shops,
and break windows. Furthermore, these fights have left several dead. Soccer is good to enjoy but these bad
things should not happen. On the other hand are people that have this sport as a business.
Soccer gives a lot of money with the publicity with the emission for tv, things
sports, etc ????.
People want to buy the t-shirt of their favorite team, they want to have the flag and other
things, the companies want that to advertise their T-shirts with players' names, the big companies advertise
 during soccer games, for that reason,  soccer
offers big winnings. A few players become famous and start to earn
a lot of money, for example, Lionel Messi earns 76.692.000.000 a day, he earns
210.115.068 Pesos and a worker normally each month earns 1.000.000 pesos, we have things crazy as this. Many families haven't food, many child haven't
any clothes, etc.
In conclusion the soccer is an important sport important but it shows me all  the disadvantages and
inequality that exist in the world. many people have a lot of money and others have only a
little.

 

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