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Hello everybody! I'm Gisela and I live in Barcelona. I'm 29 years old. I need learning English language to have a good job, travel a lot and communicate with other people. One of the major reason that I want improve my English is that I love write short (or long) stories about sci- fi and epic fantasy and I will try write it in this language. I've been writing short stories in Spanish or Catalan since two years and I'm currently writing a short novel in Catalan language. I will try everyday or every two days write some short text of six or seven lines about me, cinema, books, music or videogames, short stories,... And I hope to have a good writing and speaking English very soon. Thank you to read my first post!

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Hello Everybody!

I'm Gisela and I live in Barcelona. I'm 29 years old. I need to learn (learning) English (language) so as to have a good job, to travel a lot and to communicate with other people.

One of the major reasons that I want to improve my English is that I love to write short (or long) stories about sci- fi and epic fantasy and want to try writing them (I will try write it) in this language. I've been writing short stories in Spanish or Catalan since I was two years old and I'm currently writing a short novel in the Catalan language.

I will try everyday or so (every two days) to write some short text of six or seven lines about myself (me), cinema, books, music or videogames, short stories,... And I hope to have attained a good standard in writing and speaking English very soon.

Thank you for reading (to read) my first post!

 

A good introduction. You need to include 'to' in front of the simple present verb form. You can say 'everyday or so' if it refers to frequency/how often you write.

 

 

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Hello everybody!

I'm Gisela and I live in Barcelona. I'm 29 years old. I need to  learning English language in order to have a good job, travel a lot and communicate with other people.

One of the major reasons that I want to  improve my English is that I love writing write short (or long) stories about sci- fi and epic fantasy and I would like to try and write them in English. will try write it in this language. I've been writing short stories in Spanish or Catalan since for two years and I'm currently writing a short novel in Catalan language.

I will try everyday or every two days to write some short texts of six or seven lines about myself me, cinema, books, music or videogames, short stories,... And I hope to be more proficient in  have a good writing and speaking English very soon.

Thank you to read for reading my first post!

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Hello everybody!

I'm Gisela and I live in Barcelona. I'm 29 years old. I need to learn the English language to have a good job, travel a lot and communicate with other people.

One of the major reasons why I want improve my English is because I love to write short (or long) stories about sci-fi and epic fantasy, and I want to try writing it in this language. I've been writing short stories in Spanish or Catalan for two years and I'm currently writing a short novel in the Catalan language.

I will try everyday or every two days to write some short text of six or seven lines about me, cinema, books, music or videogames, short stories,... And I hope to have good writing and speaking English very soon.

Thank you to read my first post!

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