2014.02.20
It is cold today .I don't like cold weather Today a little tired 。
I will be up early tomorrow to go to work But I don't want to sleep now。 My friends too few 。I hope I can become good friends with you
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2014.02.20
It is cold today. I don't like cold weather. Today I am a little tired.
I will be up early tomorrow to go to work, but I don't want to go to sleep now (I would prefer to use yet). My friends too few. I don't have many friends, so* I hope that I can become good friends with you.
Nice work :)
* I just added the 'so' to help the phrases connect a little better!
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