my little poem I am waking up when you are sleeping I am sleeping when you are waking up It seems like we will never meet But tell you a secret Every night You fall asleep with my mis

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my little poem I am waking up when you are sleeping I am sleeping when you are waking up It seems like we will never meet But tell you a secret Every night You fall asleep with my miss around And every day I fall asleep with your face around end

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my little poem

I am waking up when you are sleeping

I am sleeping when you are waking up

It seems like we will never meet

But tell you a secret

Every night

I missing you when I fall asleep

And every day

When you fall asleep

My face is in your dream

end

thank you,Carla! How beautiful you are~ # @_@#

it's very nice ^^

Thank you but obviously,I'm not good at writing poem in English. I mean "我的思恋伴你入眠，你的脸庞随我入梦 " it's a pity that I cant use exact words to express my exact feelings in English. T_T

Nice poem ^^. I know this feeling.. What are you trying to say here?: You fall asleep with my miss around ? I fall asleep with your face around ?,

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