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Hello everyone, my name is Lleyson Casas, I'm 32 years old, I´m married and I have a beautiful daughter her name is Isabella, She is 22 months, I´m from Medellin, I live in Armenia because I love this city, I work during day, I like romantic music, my favorite food is lasagne, I was in the army for one year, I like to play soccer, I don´t know dance but I would like learn, sometimes I drink beer with one friend, his name is Alex, just two or three. I want travel and know other countries.
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Personal informations
Hello, everyone,. mMy name is Lleyson Casas, and I'm 32 years old., I´m married, and I have a beautiful daughter named her name is Isabella., She is 22 months old., I´m from Medellin, and I live in Armenia because I love this city., I work during the day, I like romantic music, and my favorite food is lasagne., I was in the army for one year, and I like to play soccer., I don´t know how to dance, but I would like to learn., sSometimes I drink beer, maybe two or three, with my one friend, his name is Alex., just two or three. I want to travel and learn about know other countries.
Overall pretty good! Mostly grammatical changes, along with a few changes to sound more natural. Keep up the good work!
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