Can someone correct this? Thanks in advance :)

I did the translation, but I wasn't sure about the accuracy.

Madonna plans to have concert tour again

Los Angeles - Madonna is coming back to open a concert again this summer which is the first time after 8 years. It is her first concert tour since she has become a mother.
The 42-year-old pop music superstar who recently got married with the English director named Guy Ritchie is going to open the concert tour in 19 cities in Europe and America. SFX Entertainment Promoter said yesterday that the concert would be held on 5 June in Coloane city. The promoter promised that Madonna's The Drowned World Tour concert would be the greatest show of the singer's career - Reuters


Thank you very much :)

Can someone correct this? Thanks in advance :)

I did the translation, but I wasn't sure about the accuracy.

Madonna plans another concert tour again

Los Angeles - Madonna is coming back to start a new tour in this summer, for the first time in 8 years. It is her first concert tour since she became a mother.
The 42-year-old pop music superstar, who recently got married with the English director named Guy Ritchie, is going to headline the concert tour in 19 cities in Europe and America. SFX Entertainment Promoter said yesterday that the opening concert would be held on 5 June in Coloane city. The promoter promised that Madonna's The Drowned World Tour concert would be the greatest show of the singer's career - Reuters


Thank you very much :)

Just trying to improve the English here - I can't comment about the accuracy of your translation.