Синий = Предложение, а не исправление

Красный = исправление для ошибки

Зеленый = комментарий

Yeah :)

Several months have passed and it's time to write some positive facts about learning English. So when you really want to learn language, you must concentrate all of your attention and just work on yourself. As for me, I do my best in order to learn English language fluently or speak like a native speaker. Sometimes it's really difficult because you must do this every day. And now I just want to write something on italki to express my emotions in order to get some rest. It probably helps me, I'm writing and I'm feeling relaxed. I want to express my special give a shoutout to my very nice friends who are helping me to become better than I am. I love English so much, I like to speak and listen to English. I want to improve myself. I'm about to go for a walk :) Have a nice night, italki!

Отлично! Почти не были никаких ошибок! Ты очень хорошо говоришь по английски! Удачи тебе =)

Yeah :)

Several months passed and it's time to write some positive facts about learning English. So, if you really want to learn language, you must have to concentrate and just work on yourself. As for me, I do my best in order to improve English language with fluency or to speak like a native speaker. Sometimes, it's really difficult because you must do this every day. And now I just want to write something on italki to express my emotions in order to get some rest. It probably helps me, I'm writing and I'm feeling relaxed. I want to express my special shoutout to my very nice friends who help me be better than I am. I love English so much, I like to speak and listen English. I want to improve myself. I about to go walk :) Have a nice night, italki!