Family

I'm writing about my family. For me As far as I am concerned  family is very important. it's very important the family, in my case my parents and my brother.
my father is a very good person and  hard working, when i was a child and i maked became ill he played with me a lot. now he don't doesn't work because he's retired. but after He worked in a manufactures and he liked enjoyed it.
my mother works like  is a housewife, and always looks after me and my brother and I.
my brother is older than me, he have is 35 years old. he's taller than me,  and in my opinion he'sfor me is the best bother. when i was 8 one day he played was playing in a scuale? and i went with him. suddendly i felt fell and broke my arm. he helped me to wake me up and went go to the hospital, perhaps if i was carefull i haven't wouldn't have fallen.

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Family

I'm writing about my family. For me it's very important the family, in my case my parents and my brother Family, in my case my parents and my brother, is very important to me.
My father is a very good person and hard working. When I was a child and I maked was ill he played with me a lot. Now he don't doesn't work because he's retired but after when he worked in a manufactures manufacturing plant he liked it.
My mother works like was a housewife, and always looked after me and my brother and me.
My brother is older than me, he have is 35 years old, he's taller than me, and for me is the best bother. When I was 8 one day he played in a scuale (I don't know what word you mean here) and I went with him suddendly I felt fell and broke my arm. He helped me to wake up and we went to the hospital. Perhaps if i was carefull I wouldn't have haven't fallen.