Windy days
Here where I live, we are having lots of windy days.
I like the wind when it is a soft and pleasant wind, but not this kind of wind.
Last Monday, wind broke down one of my garden's plants. It is horrible, it seems that my house is getting flying like the Dorothy's house in the tale The Wizard of Oz.
Besides, this wind is frozen, so the sensation is very unpleasant. It is too much cold!.
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Windy days
Here where I live, we are having lots of windy days.
I like the wind when it is a soft and pleasant wind, but not this kind of wind.
Last Monday, the wind broke down one of my garden plants. It is horrible, it seems that my house is getting flying like the Dorothy's house in the tale The Wizard of Oz.
Besides, this wind is frozen, so the sensation is very unpleasant. It is too much cold!
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Windy days
Here where I live, we are having lots of windy days.
I like the wind when it is a nice gentle breeze, but not this kind of wind.
Last Monday, the wind broke down one of my garden's plants.OR ''one of the plants in my garden'' It is horrible, it seems that my house is getting flying like the Dorothy's house in the tale The Wizard of Oz.
Besides, this wind is freezing, so the sensation is very unpleasant. It is too much cold!.
For more emphasis, ''This wind is freezing, it cuts right through you''
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Windy days
Here where I live, we are having lots of windy days.
I like the wind when it is a soft and pleasant wind, but not this kind of wind.
Last Monday,the wind broke down one of my garden's plants. It is horrible, it seems that my house is getting flying like the Dorothy's house in the tale The Wizard of Oz.
Besides, this wind is frozen, so the sensation is very unpleasant. It is too much cold!.
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Windy days
Here, where I live, we are having lots of windy days.
I like the wind when it is a soft and pleasant wind, but not this kind of wind.
Last Monday, wind broke blew down one of my garden plants. It is horrible, it seems that as though my house is getting flying, like the Dorothy's house in the tale, The Wizard of Oz.
Besides, this wind is frozen freezing, so the sensation is very unpleasant. It is much too cold!.
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* the wind is frozen, es correcto gramaticalmente, pero suena poético, por lo menos nosotros los Americanos no decimos: "frozen wind" en una conversación. ¿Conoce la historia del Mago de Oz? Es para ninos, pero los adultos también pueden disfrutar de esta película.
Hi James, thanks for you note.
Yes I know the tale of Oz, it's a good tale.
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