My Last dream
One day I was driving home in the higway and everything was normal in the road. It wasn´t rush hour an traffic was fluent. I drove an old green Renault 18 that I´d had fifteen years ago. I was going quite quiet, listening to the music in the radio. I drove so quiet than I didn´t notice the speed I was going.
Suddenly, when I was overtaking a truck, I found a very closed curve, I lost my car´s control and fell down into a lake. Fortunatly I could leave out my car whilst it was falling down, and by lucky I didn´t hurt.
I swam until a platform and went up to the road. I kept calm and was very quiet. I just thought in my lucky to be alive and didn´t matter things I had lost into my car.
Inmediatly I woke up very quiet and serene. This was my last dream.
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My Last dream
One day I was driving home on the higway and everything was normal on the road. It wasn´t during rush hour an traffic was good. I drove an old green Renault 18 that I´d had fifteen years ago. I was going quite quietly, listening to the music in the radio. I drove so quietly than I didn´t notice my speed.
Suddenly, when I was passing a truck, I came across a very sharp curve. I lost control of the car and fell down into a lake. Fortunatly I could get out of the car as it was falling down, and I luckily didn´t get hurt.
I swam to a platform and went up to the road. I kept calm and was very quiet. I just thought I was lucky to be alive and it didn´t matter that I had lost my car.
Inmediatly I woke up very quiet and serene. This was my last dream.
Thank you every one for the corrections
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Thank you very much Johnathan for the corrections
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