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IMMIGRATION: please, correct my essay How the article try to explain Italy' immigration policy, it's clear that Silvio Berlusconi aim to reduce increasingly "illegal immigration", in other words he's trying to stem, imposing to turn back to the large amount of immigrants who arrive without papers, for this reason they cannot legally get a job. They have no choice here, and they are obligized to join the other illegal immigrants living in Italy and who aren't doing nothing. The newest policy's immigration is ruder thant precedents because now Italian vessels are always ready to force returns to boats that have not reached Italian's coast yet. In this way we would like to avoid immigrant arrives in our land.

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IMMIGRATION: please, correct my essay

The article tries to explain Italy’s immigration policy. It is clear that Silvio Berlusconi aims to increasingly reduce “illegal immigration”. He is trying to force illegal immigrants to return back to their land by limiting their ability to legally find suitable jobs. They have no choice here, and they are obligated to join the other illegal immigrants living in Italy who can’t do anything. The newest immigration policy is stricter than the former one, because now Italian vessels are always prepared to force boats that have not yet reached Italy’s coast to return to where they came from. This is an example of how we would like to prevent illegal immigrants from arriving on our land.

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IMMIGRATION: please, correct my essay

How the article try to explain Italy's immigration policy. it's clear that Silvio Berlusconi aims to reduce increasingly "illegal immigration". in other words, he's trying to stem, imposing to turn back to the large amount of immigrants who arrive without papers, for this reason they cannot legally get a job he is trying to force illegal immigrants to come back to their land by limiting them to find suitable jobs legally. They have no choice here, and they are obligized obligated to join the other illegal immigrants living in Italy and , who aren't doing nothing can't do anything. The newest policy's immigration immigration policy is ruder thant precedents the former one, because now Italian vessels are always ready to force returns to boats that have not reached Italian's coast yet(?). In this way, we would like to avoid immigrant arrives in our land.

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