Alco-hockey player

This is a real story about russian "life". ;) I’m trying to improve my knowledge of using the past tenses.


One day a man was playing (played) hockey with his friends. After a good game they had a party and he drank too much alcohol. When the party (they had) finished our hero decided to drive back home in (on) his car. Of (Off) course, he was driving very erratically (suspiciously) and a policeman stopped him and (. He) asked him to step (come) out of his car. The man agreed, came out and fell abruptly. The policeman was really astonished because the man had forgotten to take off his skates.
Hope you’ll correct my mistakes.

Alco-hockey player

This is a real story about russian "life". ;) I’m trying to improve my knowledge of using the past tenses.


One day a man played hockey with his friends. After a good game they had a party and he drank too much alcohol. When they had finished our hero decided to drive back home on in his car. Off Of course, he was driving very suspiciously irratically and a policeman stopped him. He asked him to come get out of his car. The man agreed, came got out and immediately fell abruptly to the floor. The policeman was really astonished because the man had forgotten to take off his skates.
Hope you’ll correct my mistakes.

Good attempt - :)