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Very few things about my country While I was watching the Super Bowl (yup, I like American Football), I thought about make a couple of posts where I could talk about my country. I think I could talk about food. Food is always a good start. I'm interested on do this because there are people who wants to know about Chile. Although I could talk about places (cities, locations, towns), I would like to do it showing some pictures taken by me. I have in mind to go to the south of my country soon, so I hope to enjoy the nature and take some photos. Following the topic about places, I choose the south before the north. I like very much the nature, visit fields and forests, the colder weather. Maybe you prefer the beach and a warmer place to stay, so you should go to the north of Chile. Obviously, this difference between climates extrapolates to food too. Habits about food changes when you go to a different region. As a zone with a lot of fields, in the south it's more easy to find farms, which means the main source of meat is red meat (beef, steak, chop). Anyway, this is a very simple analysis. There are a lot of factors which affects the food according to the region. But a longer explanation would need more characters and a better vocabulary. And I still need to be more fluent on english. - Mientras veía el Super Bowl (sí, me gusta el Fútbol Americano), pensaba en hacer un par de posts donde pudiera hablar sobre mi país. Y pensé que podría hablar sobre comida. La comida siempre es un buen inicio. Me interesa hacerlo porque hay mucha gente que quiere saber acerca de Chile. Aunque podría hablar sobre lugares (ciudades, localidades, pueblos), ésto me gustaría hacerlo mostrando fotografías tomadas por mí. Tengo en mente ir al sur de mi país pronto, por lo que espero disfrutar de la naturaleza y tomar algunas fotos. Continuando con el tema de los lugares, yo elijo el sur antes que el norte. Me gusta mucho la naturaleza, visitar campos y bosques, y los climas más fríos. Quizás prefieras la playa y un lugar más cálido para estar, entonces deberías ir al norte de Chile. Obviamente, esta diferencia entre los climas se extrapola a la comida también. Los hábitos alimenticios varían cuando vas a una región distinta. Al ser una zona con mucho campo, en el sur es más fácil hallar granjas, lo que significa que la principal fuente de carne es la carne roja (vacuno, filete, cerdo). De todos modos este es un análisis muy simple... [Spanish for the people who wants a translation]

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*Few mistakes i could spot->


1. I thought about make a couple of posts -> I thought about making a couple of posts

2. I'm interested on do this because there are people who wants to know about Chile -> I'am interested to do this because there are people who want to know about Chile. (Thanks! ) 

3. I like very much the nature, visit fields and forests, the colder weather. -> I like the nature, visiting fileds and forests , the colder weather very much (Me too, I love to enjoy the nature)

4. There are a lot of factors which affects the food according to the region 

5. Spanish for the people who wants a translation -> who want a translation

 

*Keep on writing about your place whenever you get time, i am delighted to read as always,  try to learn new words and incorporate them in your sentences so as to increase vocabulary.

* I am working on this Spanish translation and trying to understand the new words which i see. Thanks for that as well



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Hi !, I like your country too, I was in Chile 2 years ago, in viña del mar,,,,its too cold but a beautifull place..
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A few things about my country...

While I was watching the Super Bowl (yup, I like American Football), I thought about making a couple of posts where I could talk about my country. I think I should talk about food. Food is always a good start.

I'm interested in doing this because there are people who wants to know about Chile. Although I could talk about places (cities, locations, towns) I would like to  do it show ing some pictures taken by me. I have in mind going to the south of my country soon in mind, so I hope to enjoy the nature and take some photos.

Following the topic about of places, I'd choose the south before the north. I like very much very much like the nature, visiting fields and forests, and the colder weather. Maybe you prefer the beach and a warmer place to stay, so you should go to the north of Chile.
Obviously, this difference between climates extrapolates to food too. Habits about Food changes when you go to a different region. As a zone with a lot of fields, in the south it's more easy to find farms, which means the main source of meat is red meat (beef, steak, chop).

Anyway, this is a very simple analysis. There are a lot of factors which affects the food according to the region. But a longer explanation would need more characters and a better vocabulary and I still need to be more fluent in English.


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No surprise there that you started with food! Its nice to read about your place, and know some aspects, and hope to read more things in near future. There are few grammatical mistakes though, which i will let you know.. :)

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