First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi everyone, I come from China, I'm 30 years old, and I'm female. 

English is so essential in to my work, so I also hope to know make more new friends here, and know have friends from all over the world. I also want to know learn more stories, which is interesting, right?

Nice to meet you! 希望可以做好朋友。 

Your journal is pretty good, but there are a couple things that you should keep in mind. The first letter of the first word in every sentence, all proper nouns, and the pronoun "I", are always capitalized. English grammar is also a little different from the Chinese grammar. You can't just connect everything with commas. What you are doing is called a comma splice. 

There are also several words you used strangely. You don't usually use "so" with "essential", because "essential" means that it is necessary and there is only one level of necessity. You "make friends" and you "know people", but you don't "know friends". 我觉得这个就是跟中文一样的，一个人可以做朋友，还可以知道其他的人,也可以有朋友，但是从来不知道朋友。

  如果我把中文写错了，对不起。I hope that helped!