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Second part: text about literature Secondly, the author uses his talent for writing to speak about his art. For example in “The cat and the moon” one of the main topics is the change (with the changing shape of the moon and of the cat’s eyes) but this topic reminds the romanticism in general: in fact the romantic poet is instable and full of doubts, that’s why he cannot stay in the same mood: he changes. Certain poets like Keats try even to give a definition of “a poet” in their texts (it’s the case in the Keats ‘poem “Where’s the poet” in which he describes the poet as a sensible being connected to the whole universe.) Also we can even find a global definition of art within the Poe’s short stories: for instance in “The tell-tale heart”, the narrator is a man obsessed by his “perfect” crime. To express the crazy man’s obsession, Poe uses repetitions and a nervous punctuation. And we finally can link the character’s obsession with the art in general: the artist is an obsessive person, who always tries to draw his art towards perfection, that’s why he cannot stay in the same mood: he is never satisfied. In conclusion, by putting themselves in their texts as an “I” and by using their eyes for writing, authors give us the definition of a poet, an artist, we can now guess what the word “art” means: An obsession about showing in a perfect way what the human being feels looking at the universe around him: an impossible and inaccessible goal, a madness which makes the art always evolve and reborn.

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Second part: text about literature

Secondly, the author uses his talent for writing to speak about his art. For example in “The Cat and the Moon,” (il faut toujours capitaliser le titre) one of the main topics is the change (with the changing shape of the moon and of the cat’s eyes) but this topic reminds the one of romanticism in general: in fact the romantic poet is instable and full of doubts, that’s why he cannot stay in the same mood, : (il ne faut pas utilise les deux-points pour deux fois dans une phrase, ça ne marche pas en anglais) he changes. Certain poets like Keats try even to give a definition of “a poet” in their texts (it’s the case as in the Keats ‘poem “Where’s The Poet” in which he describes the poet as a sensible being connected to the whole universe.)
Also we can even find a global definition of art within the Poe’s short stories: for instance in “The tell-tale heart”, the narrator is a man obsessed by with his “perfect” crime. To express the crazy man’s obsession, Poe uses repetitions and a nervous punctuation. And we finally can link the character’s obsession with the art in general: the artist is an obsessive person, who always tries to draw his art towards perfection, that’s why he cannot stay in the same mood,: he is never satisfied.

In conclusion, by putting themselves in their texts as an “I” and by using their eyes for writing, authors writers (c'est bon, mais « writers » est plus normale) give us the definition of a poet, an artist, we can now guess what the word “art” means: An obsession about with showing in a perfect way what the human being feels like looking at the universe around him,: an impossible and inaccessible goal, a madness which makes the art always evolve and reborn evolving and being born anew.

 

Excellent travail ! Vraiment, ton anglais est mieux que beaucoup des étudiants dans leur premiere année d'université. Cependant, il faut écrire les phrases plus courtes. Anglais est très stricte ici. Je pense que tu devrais lire à propos de « run-on sentences. » Et si tu veux me corriger, j'apprends le français. Je suis debutant en ta langue. :)

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