My best friend
My best friend have a baby, before his child was born, now she live with your boyfriend and his baby, I'm very happy for her but I sometimes I miss her above all when we went to the beach. Well I guess is part of life.
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My best friend
My best friend had a baby. After the child was born, she moved in and lived with her boyfriend and their child. I'm very happy for her, but sometimes I miss her so much, and I always think of when we went to the beach. Well, I guess that thinking of someone or something is just a part of life.
Your essay was really hard to understand, but your words were beautiful and poetic. I was enojoying reading your essay.
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My best friend
My best friend is have having a baby. Before her child was born, now she lived with your her boyfriend and his baby. I'm very happy for her but I sometimes I miss her and above all, I miss when we would go went to the beach. Well I guess that is a part of life.
I tried to stick with what you had and change as little as possible. Keep trying and you will improve :)
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My best friend
My best friend is have having a baby. Before her child was born, now she lived with her boyfriend and his baby, I'm very happy for her but I sometimes miss her and I would miss her the most when we go to the beach. Well I guess this is part of life.0
Hi! If you need help with spoken English,
I'm glad to help you! I promise to go very
slow and very patient! I am always looking
for new friends all over the world! Please
add me to Skype: jason_s1972 .
Thanks and take care! :) -- Jason
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