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I Love the Sunshine and My life
It's 14:00, the bright sun-light sunlight outside my window is enjoyable. It is a good time to bask and enjoy my favorite Sichuan-flavored snacks with my best friends, a group of lovely fellows.
As a girl, for the first time when my fellow university students known knew that I liked online games, they were so surprised and worrying worried about the my future life, because they guessed that I was an indoorswoman. And then, they were more surprised when I spent a lot of time joining many activities, so, I changed the my image in their hearts minds, but, in essence, I also know I am a mild indoorswoman ==(hehe~). In the last semester, we went to Chongqing for the Jay's concert, and we stayed at home for 2 days because of the bad weather, I still remember their the expressions on their faces, haha, like 3 tones, in contrast, I felt very comfortable.
With my friends, I done did many silly things, for example, forgot to bring money to shop, then blamed each other someone else/another person, and at the same time, we would beg to pay next another time. Although we will would say:"That's a disgrace! Don't tell everybody!", just a few minutes later, both everyone forget forgot the their promises, and finally, everybody knows knew that. But, it's it was a nice experience.
Now, my best friend,Taotao is learning driving to drive, her classmates in the same driving school have got their license last year at the same time. As the her best friend, it's my duty to call her everyday to play a joke on and encourage her.
Stop here, in a word, my life is full of sunshine and I love everyone around me.
"like 3 tones" makes no sense at all in English. I'm guessing it's a Chinese idiom?
"Indoorswoman" is not really a word in English. Perhaps "I like keeping to myself" or perhaps "loner" (although this word can sometimes be used as an insult)
This reads quite fluently, despite all the red text! You just seem to frequently confuse tenses.
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