Results of the simulations
An analysis of the results of the simulations showed that lowering the temperature at which the processes of wastewater treatment were being carried out affected negative on the quality of wastewater discharged into the environment due to increased concentrations of indicators, especially total nitrogen.
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Results of the simulations:
An analysis of the simulation results revealed that lowering the temperature at which the processes of wastewater treatment were being carried out negatively affected the quality of wastewater discharged into the environment due to increased concentrations of indicators, especially total nitrogen.
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Results of the simulations
An analysis of the simulation results showed that lowering the temperature at which the processes of wastewater treatment were being carried out negatively affected the quality of wastewater discharged into the environment due to increased concentrations of indicators, especially total nitrogen.
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I am new here on italki and so this is my first time at commenting on someone else's work. I read the above sentence a few times and I thought the author's knowledge of vocabulary is impressive! The sentence structure was a good attempt as I understood what was being said but James' corrective restructuring made the sentence flow more smoothly and of course adding the -ly to the word "negative" was a good call. I just added one word change below and a punctuation addition.
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