homework: Loneliness
Write an essay regarding "loneliness"
I have terrible grammar mistake! Please correct me ! and also my vocab is not very good T.T, please replace it with a better words if u can. Thank you!!
Let me tell you this:" if you meet a loner, no matter what they tell you, it's not because they enjoy solitude. It's because they have tried to blend into the world before, and people continue to disappoint them."said by Jodi Picoult in My Sister's Keeper.
Her name was Aiko , meaned love and caring.However, she didn't treat as that way.She had been lonely all the time.It was not because of she was the only child in her family. In fact, Aiko had a elder brother and sister, which named Charlie and Elizabeth. Nevertheless ,they hated Aiko.
Their mother was died because of giving birth to Aiko.They blamed her since she was the killer. She killed their mom. She ruined their life. To add insult to injury, even her father also turned his back to Aiko.
The neighbourhood called her "Noxious" covertly. All of the parents not allowed their children to play with her because she was the unlucky sign , and they afraid she would infect the bad luck to thier children.Sometimes, I even doubted that they were the monkey that haven't evolved , how come they had such conventional mode of thought ?Frustratingly, my parents were one of them too. I had been a good child , but i wouldn't obey them this time.
I am the boy who lived next to Aiko, I am Jan. I thought I knew Aiko more than anybody else,I thought she told me all her things...However, the fact was , she had concealed some from me.
It was 25th December 2007, Aiko was seven years old at that time.As everyone knew, it was Christmas. Aiko's house was decorated with beautiful,stunning light bulbs .The mouth-watering roasted turkey was also prepared on the table already. Everything seem perfect , only the gifts under the huge christmas tree were the exception. They were three children in Aiko family, but only with two gifts.Aiko knew, she was the forgotten.Tears streaming down her face , she rushed back to her room ,locked the door and wrote something on her diary.It ended up with "Daddy, where is my present?".
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