Which one you are more interested in : Persons or monuments ?
In my opinion , i am always interested in persons more , because we are the one who build them .they are always objects and we are subjects .they are only rocks and we are more valuable .that's what i think , what about you ?
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Which one are you more interested in: People or monuments? [1]
In my opinion, [2] I am always interested in people more, because we are the ones who build the monuments. They are only objects, but we are their creators. They are only rocks, and we are more valuable. That's what I think. What about you?
[1] It is not correct to leave spaces between a word and the punctuation mark that follows the word. For example, instead of "People or monuments ?", write "People or monuments?"
[2] I deleted "In my opinion", because you do not express an "opinion." You say, "I am always interested in people more"; and that is not opinion. You know what you are interested in.
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I agree with you! Not just people are important, Earth's animals too! I own a little dog and she has morals too.
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