School event. Can anyone check my essay please? Thank you so much =)
Some schools and colleges have held a music and drama festival in my town recently. They seemed to be prestigious professionals who were in charge of showing an enjoyable and amazing spectacle. Even though, there were some technical problems, they managed to fix them very quickly; which is admirable if we take into account the fact that they were all very young people.
On the one hand, I was fascinated by the orchestra. They played the soundtrack of a famous French film, in which children are grouped to sing in a chorus. In this case, they didn´t sing like the characters of the film. Instead, they played their flutes beautifully.
On the other hand, I was amazed by the performance, in which some of my classmates took part. I didn´t know they were such good stage actors and actresses actually. I was honestly delighted with their sense of humor and their ability to manage with all sorts of mishaps and difficulties. I think that I was the only one who noticed some of their mistakes, as I had been watching all their rehearsals. Otherwise, I wouldn´t have been able to detect anything different or strange. Finally, we all clapped as if we had never seen anything so extraordinary and brilliant in our entire lives. It was an indescribable beautiful event led by very mature young children.
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