Preparing an English exam. HELP!

Hi guys, I am currently preparing for my final English exam and I would really appreciate  it if someone could correct me this text for me because probably I will probably present it to my teacher during the exam.
Thank you in advance!


My intercultural profile.
In a working environment, I consider myself as a personal-oriented person individual since I have the ability of to building rapport quickly with many different types of people. Moreover, I am able to make people comfortable adapting myself to their own style.

My working style is results-oriented, I am always focusing on reaching goals even in very complicated situations. I have the capacity of to adapting my personal style to people who are different from me. For this reason, I believe they see me in a positive way.

What about listening? I love asking questions to make sure the other part person understand me ina  the correct way. I don't mind explaning things which are not clear again and again.
According to the Regarding speaking, I always try to adapt the my way of speaking to be sure the other people understand me in every context. I prefer simplifying my language and using similar words depending on the context.

I love other cultures, so it allows me to show this knowledge in every different business conversations. I am not interested in building influence in other because I am a results-oriented person. I always try to listen and respect the other part's person's opinion in a business and personal context.

I deleted the whole sentence in red above because it did not make sense.

Maybe you were trying to say -

I am not interested in influencing others because I am a results oriented person. 

Now the sentence is grammatically correct, but it seems the wrong thing to say.

Preparing an English exam. HELP!

Hi guys, I am currently preparing for my final English exam and I would really apreciate if someone could correct me this text because I will probably I will present it to my teacher during the exam.
Thank you in advance!


My intercultural profile.
In a working environment, I would consider myself as a personal-oriented person since I have the ability of building a rapport (do you mean report) quickly with many different types of people. Moreover, I am able to make people comfortable adapting myself to their own style.

My working style is results-oriented, I am always focusing on reaching goals even in very complicated situations. I have the capacity of adapting my personal style to people who are different from me. For this reason, I believe they see me in a positive way.

What about listening? I love asking questions to make sure the other part person understands me in a correct the right way ( the right way sounds better). I don't mind explaning things which are not clear again and again.
According to with the speaking, I always try to adapt the a way of speaking to be sure other people understand me in every context. I prefer simplifying my language and using similar words depending on the context.

I love cultures, so it allows me to show this knowledge in every different business conversations. I am not interested in building influence in others because I am a results-oriented person. I always try to listen and respect the other person's opinion in a business and a personal context.

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I might have missed a few things but this was very good, I wish you luck. XD