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muddy but warm weather
Today is warm, too warm that the snow which snowed the whole last night melted so fast. When I drove to a plaza, at the parking I almost couldn't get off the car. I was like walking in a puddle but the snow instead of mud. I shouldn't wear the black cotton boots which I bought recently. They are wet from outside to inside as well as my socks. From the white blotting on my shoes, I estimated that it must be salt which suppose to melt the snow in the water. I can't help but thinking if my socks are full of salt. Maybe do my foot. My foot which steeping in the salt cold socks was so uncomfortable. But compared the extremely cold weather several days before, I'd rather enjoy walking in the warm muddy street.
Warm, Muddy Weather
Today was so warm, that the snow, which fell last night, has already melted. When I parked at the plaza I almost couldn't get out of the car, as it was like walking in a puddle, not of water, but of mud. I shouldn't have worn the black cotton boots that I bought recently, as they were wet from the the inside out, including my socks. There are now blots of white on my shoes, which I believe is salt from the melted snow and I can't help but think that my socks are also full of salt. It was uncomfortable walking around with wet, cold feet, but compared to the extremely cold weather as of late, I enjoyed walking the warm, muddy street.
When writing, consider the tense. Do you want it to be past, present, or future? Once you decide, the entire piece must be consistant. I also removed a few repeated items, but it was a good piece overall.
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