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About me Hi! I am Tamara from Russia. I want to study abroad ( USA or Germany). I like fashion and now go study Makeup - Stylist.( 2 mounts) I love Rock music :) very very very and football. I am fun MU! When I have time, I work like model. My favorite country is Japan and I like japanese language ;) I very like sweets :) Now my life is hard, but I hope, that early all will be good !

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About me

Hi! I am Tamara from Russia. I want to study abroad ( USA or Germany). I like fashion and now go study makeup - stylist for two months. ( 2 mounts) I love rock music :) very, very, very much (alternatively you can say, 'I adore rock music') and football. I am a fun of MU! When I have time, I work like as a model. My favourite country is Japan and I like the Japanese language ;)
I very like sweets a lot :)
Now, my life is hard, but I hope, that early soon all will be good alright!

 

 Lovely write up, welcome to the site! I also adore rock music and football but MU is crap ;-)

Write to me if you want to have a language exchange, I need help with Russian =)

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About me

Hi! I am Tamara from Russia. I want to study abroad (USA or Germany). I like fashion and now go study I'm going to study Makeup - Stylist.( 2 mounts months) I love Rock music :) very very very much* and football. I am fun funny MU! When I have time, I work like model. [It is better to say "I work as a model". Saying that you work like a model can mean you pretend to be one]. My favorite country is Japan and I like the japanese language ;)
I very like sweets :) I like sweets very much OR I like sweets a lot!
Now my life is hard, but I hope, that early all will be good !

 

* You also can say "I like X a lot".

Keep up your good work and you're gonna be better very soon! Your ideas and the meaning of your text is very clear.

Cheers! 

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1st. i love rock music very much 2nd. i am funny

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