Creation vrs Evolution
A big controversy exist between God's Word and the scientific deductions of man.
The first one describe the creation of the universe and life, with perfect order and love, by an eternal being, with infinite power and wisdom.
The second one describe an explosion, that arise from the mere causality, where all the existence take form and order by its self.
The physics establish that material things disorders spontaneously, and needs external forces or energy to get in order.
Seems that there's a contradiction, between the universe evolution and physic laws.
Just have to see the complexity and perfection of the nature, to realize that there's an intelligent design that support it.
Every one has the right to choose on what to believe and not to believe, just make your own conclusion.
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There are many valid arguments made that humans are poorly designed with fatal flaws instead of intelligently designed to last for a long period of time.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Argument_from_poor_design
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There is also an option to believe nothing. The way I see it, existence of the world is just a miracle. Conception, that explain how it has been created and exists, are just for fun.
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There is a social conflict between the Bible and Science. The Bible describes the creation of a perfect and orderly universe by an eternally powerful god. Science describes the creation of an unpredictable universe with a random explosion. The Laws of Physics establish that material things are naturally in a state of disorder, and require an external force to stabilize. I believe that the Theory of Evolution and the Laws of Physics contradict each other. When I became aware of the complexity and the perfection of nature, I came to support the theory of "Intelligent Design," but we all have the ability to come to our own conclusions.
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Creation vs. Evolution
A big controversy exists between God's Word (you could also say "the word of God" this is more common) and the scientific deductions of man.
The first one describes the creation of the universe and life, with perfect order and love, by an eternal being, with infinite power and wisdom. (I'm not sure how to fix this sentence but it has too many commas. Try making it into two separate sentences).
The second one describes an explosion, that (use either "explosion that" without a comma or "explosion, which") arises from the mere causality, where all the existence takes form and order by itself.
The Physics has established that material things disorders spontaneously and needs external forces or energy to get in become ordered.
It seems that there's (use "there is" when writing a more advanced and formal paper. It is slang to use words with 's endings such as it's, that's or there's) a contradiction between the evolution of the universe evolution and the laws of physics laws.
One just have has to see the complexity and perfection of the nature to realize that there's there is an intelligent design that supports it.
Everyone (this is one word) has the right to choose on what to they want to believe, and not to believe, so make your own conclusion.
Your writing skills are very good. The best suggestion I can give you would be to not overuse commas. If you look back through this you will see that I erased quite a few.
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