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A Friday in our businnes Today is Friday and my aunt comes to visit us. When she comes, she cook lunch but in the evening we cook dinner. She will tell us how her week has been. She also help us with our business. We create cakes by order like Aces of cakes .... ok we try :D . I invite you to see our work at fb.com/ricoscupcakespasteleria. Our business was opened three years and six months ago. It's going well, however we are going to close becouse we want to get a job about our careers and becouse this job is very hard. Also is dissapointing when people don't want to pay a very good cake becouse other people make cakes cheaper but uglier too! Thanks for helping me to improve my English.

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A Friday in our businnes

Today is Friday and my aunt comes is coming to visit us. When she comes, she'll cook lunch, but in the evening we'll cook dinner. She will tell us how her week has been. She also helps us with our business. We create custom cakes by order like Aces of Cakes .... ok we try :D . I invite you to see our work at fb.com/ricoscupcakespasteleria.

Our business was opened three and a half years and six months ago. It's going well. However, we are going to close because we want to get a job about related to our careers and because this job is very hard. Also it's disappointing when people don't want to pay for a very good cake because other people make cakes cheaper but uglier too!

Thanks for helping me to improve my English.

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Today is Friday and my aunt comes to visit us. When she comes, she cooks lunch but in the evening we cook dinner. She will tell us how has her week been. She also help us with our business. We create cakes by order like Aces of cakes .... ok we try :D . I invite you to see our work at fb.com/ricoscupcakespasteleria.

Our business was opened three years and six months ago. It's going well, however we are going to close becouse we want to get a job about our careers and becouse this job is very hard. Also is dissapointing when people don't want to pay a very good cake because other people make cakes cheaper but uglier too!

Thanks for helping me to improve my English.

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