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Different types of people
You'll sometimes find some amazing people who are always positive and who don't give up even when they come across many obstacles.On the other hand,you can find some people who don't struggle enough when something prevents them from getting what they want. So tell me which type of person you are and how do you manage to do something even when it is difficult.(Please provide a correction if you have a good level in english)
This is how I would have written it (though there's nothing wrong with your version except a few minor mistakes, I think it would flow better if you changed it slightly and changed the vocabulary somewhat):
Sometimes you'll find amazing people who are always positive and who don't give up even when they encouter many obstacles. On the other hand, you can also meet people who don't perservere when something prevents them from getting what they want. So tell me, what kind of person are you and how do you manage to do something even when it's difficult?
But anyways, you're great! I'm just a bit nitpicky when it comes to writing. Hopefully this helps! You must be at a very high level of English :)
Different Types of People
You'll sometimes find some amazing people who are always positive and who don't give up even when the come across many obstacles. On the other hand, you can find some people who don't struggle enough when something prevents them from getting what they want. So please tell what type of person you are and how you manage to do something even when it is difficult. (Please provide a correction if you have a good level in English.)
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