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Do you know what had happened today?? Today.. something strange and incredible had happened, the place was a pharmacy, the situation was between a pharmacist girl and a patient, A patient entered the pharmacy and asked the pharmacist about a tramadol ( it is an abuse drug), so the pharmacist asked the patient for the prescription to give him that medicine, but the man refused that and had threatened her with an injection contains benzene(petrol) , she refused again and shouted at him, so he was nervous and injected her with the syringe in her neck :( she was crying and got out from the pharmacy screaming and running in the street, but the man followed her to kill her, and all people were wondering and afraid to interfere, suddenly, the pharmacist had stopped from running beside an old man who asked her why you had stopped the running, quickly scape my daughter, but she told him that The benzene in the syringe had finished :(( please, don't say bad words it is just a notebook ^_^ :D :D :D

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Do you know what had happened today?

 

Today. something a strange and incredible incident had happened. The place of the incident was a pharmacy and the situation was between a pharmacist girl and a patient. (The incident took place at a pharmacy and it involved a lady pharmacist and a male patient.)

A patient entered the pharmacy and asked the pharmacist about tramadol, which is an abuse drug. So, the pharmacist asked the patient for the prescription to give him that medicine, but the man refused and insisted on his demand. The pharmacist said, "I am sorry. I can't help it. No prescription, no medicine" and she moved to other customers. All of a sudden, he pulled out an injection from his bag and had threatened her, "Do you know this? It's benzene (petrol). You dare not to listen to me and I will kill you."   with an injection contains benzene(petrol) , However, she refused again and started shouting at him and at the same time, started calling nearby people for help. This made him more agitated he was nervous and he lunged at her and tried to inject her in the neck.  with the syringe in her neck. :(

Trembling with fear, she was started crying and got ran out from the pharmacy screaming and running all the way in the street, but the man followed her. to kill her, and All the people were watching them both in bewilderment and they were too were wondering afraid to interfere. Suddenly, the pharmacist she had stopped from running. beside An old man, who was nearby, who asked, "Why did you stop running my child? He is still behind you. Just go and get somewhere safe." you had stopped the running, quickly scape my daughter, However, the lady smiled and said, "I know the benzene in the syringe is finished."
but she told him that

The benzene in the syringe had finished :((

Please, don't say any bad words. It is just a notebook entry. ^_^ :D :D :D

 

Usually simple past tense is used to tell a story.

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