Corrections · 3
Bank Robbery - Prologue
Hi all, I have to write a short story about a bank robbery for my English class, a little help with my mistakes will be very useful. Thanks in advance.
______________________________________________________________________________________________
I am ready to relate the amazing events that occurred in December 2013 I wonder sometimes how I could achieve it it could have happened to me (is this what you mean?). I was only an individual walking along the street, thinking about my life and hoping for a change. Time was going certainly passing by, and I wished for some kind of adventure, but nothing ever happened. I was thinking in about these silly things when I passed next to a bank office. I remembered at once I had to pay an invoice, and I thought, “shit, I hate to lose my time, but I must do it.” (I would NOT use a bad word!)
Sounds very interesting so far! Watch out for run-on sentences--2 sentences which have been joined together, but really should be separate.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
