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true story
i I looked watched the movie " open water ". The story talked about a couple on vacation who decided to make go diving ( plunge ) in Bahamas. Unfortunately, monitors thinking the monitors thought that the complete group leave left and forget forgot the couple in the middle of the ocean. They will remained in the water during the day and night surrounded by sharks. It's horrible because this story is true. and i I want say : What's happened this day ? How could they forget 2 people ?. I think it's horrible to dead die like this. When i I go diving, i'm thinkink I will think about this movie.
Bonjour- Pas mal du tout...tu as besoin de regarder tes tenses un peu. Je voudrais pratique ma francais. Bonne chance!
true story
i looked movie " open water ". The story talk about a couple on vacation who decide to make diving ( plunge ) in Bahamas. Unfortunately, monitors thinking the complete group leave and forget the couple in the middle of the ocean. They will remain in the water during the day and night surrounded by sharks. It's horrible because this story is true. and i want say : What's happened this day ? How could they forget 2 people ?. I think it's horrible to dead like this. When i go diving, i'm thinkink about this movie.
Hi Ambre,
Thanks for your fun entry about "Open Water." I liked your story, and, generally, this notebook was well written. Please find my corrections below! Oh, and ask any questions if you have them :)
I watched a movie called "Open Water." The story is about a couple on vacation who decide to go diving in the Bahamas. Unfortunately, the chaperones watching the group leave and forget the couple in the middle of the ocean. They remain in the water day and night, surrounded by sharks. It's horrible because this story is true, and I want to say, "What happened? How could they forget 2 people?" I think it's horrible to die like that. When I go diving, I'll be thinking about this movie.
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