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about tonight or something I saw James Blunt show again and last time was summer in 2011,so excited. This summer I will go to USA~ I also am a drummer and have our own band in my university. I love music,tennis,tattoo,and drawing. I have two tattoo.There is a pic about my new tattoo when last year.

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about tonight or something

 

I saw the James Blunt show again and the last time was in the summer in of 2011,; I'm so excited.

 

This summer I will go to the USA!~


I am also am a drummer and we have our own band at in my university.

I love music, tennis ,tattoos, and drawing.

 

I have two tattoos. Thisere is a pic of about my new tattoo fromwhen last year.

 

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About Tonight or Something

I watched a (saw) James Blunt show again, the (and) last time being in (was) Summer of (in) 2011, and found it so exciting. (excited.)
This Summer I will be going (go) to USA~
I also am a drummer and we have our own band in my university.
I love music,tennis,tattoos,and drawing.
I have two tattoos. Here (There) is a pic of (about) my latest (new) tattoo from (when) last year.

 

Nice picture. I suggested using capitals for the title, as this is considered normal. 'Summer' would also need to be written in capitals. With your trip to USA being in the future you should say 'will be going' and the plural of tattoo is tattoos. 

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