Already a correction is given by a native speaker, so this correction is just to provide some more help as I sensed a different meaning of some of the sentences.

Who Are My Readers? audience :)

If you are writing something, which is comming purely from your heart  : purely such as an exercise in about self-improvement, .so don't worry about who the readers are an audience who is he and what they he like ? If you think someone might my read what you have written as an exercise, done as efforts, then you are allowed to think about your readers audience and making as you make your writing better. However, but don't try to please everyone.  .the audience Audience The readers will listen pay attention to you if you have something to say. Trying to change your writing style to fit satisfy every reader is, for me, like being a politician and trying to please ing every single voter. It can't be done. In other words, it's complitely completely impossible. Just be honest with your words and the readers will be unwittingly drawn to your writing.   correspond .

who is my audience :)

If you are writing something comming from heart, write purely, as if it were an exercise in self-improvement. So don't worry about who the audience who is he and what they like. If you think someone might read what you have done as efforts, then you are allowed to think about your audience, as you make your writing better. However, don't try to please everyone. The audience Audience will listen to you if you have something to say. Trying to change your style to fit every reader is for me like being a politician and pleasing every single voter. It can 't be done. In other words, it's complitely impossible. Just be honest, and readers will respond accordingly.

[Good job.  Remember to put a space after every period and comma, but not in front of them.]