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hiking around the world
hi people,
i would like to write some sentences about hiking and climbing the mountains. I am really excited about rock climbing, it is the best part of my life. If i am climbing or hiking on mountains i am feeling so happy and free :-). You may say that I am a fool, but it is really true. I climb the face of some rock and then when I am up there looking on at the view it is(/gives me) a feeling of freedom and independence. I hope that I could climb until i growing old. :-)
1. In English "I" is always supposed to be a capital letter. On the internet people often write it as a small letter but it is best to be consistent - you have used a mixture of I and i :)
2. English doesn't use the word "some" like slavic languages - instead we use "a" because that is an indefinite article, so you can just as easily say "I climb the face of a rock"
3. Overall, this is good :)
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