Unhappy day

Today I'm unhappy.because I don't didn't pass my drive driving test. This is was my second attempt. I'll have to wait until next time to try again.  I'm sad because this time I nearly made it, but I'm fail I still failed.  So I'm sad.

Never mind Tina, lots of people fail on their first attempt!

 - try writing in longer sentences using "and" and commas to link them together.  It will flow much better this way.

- there are a few different ways to say "my second attempt".  You could say, "my second go" "my second try" "my second shot at it"

If I was writing this myself I'd say it like this:

Today I'm unhappy because I didn't pass my driving test for the second time.  This time I nearly made it but I still failed.  I'm sad because I'll have to wait to try again.

Unhappy day

Today I'm unhappy because I didn't pass my driving test. This was my second time. I will have to wait until next time. This time I nearly made it, but failed, so I'm sad.

Unhappy day

Today I'm unhappy, because I didn't pass my driving test.This was my second attempt, now I have to wait until the next time I take it. This time I was close to passing it, but I didn't. So that's why I'm sad.