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The invisible hand. If you haven't heard about the invisible hand of the economy, maybe you don't understand the capitalism like a system of control. i am not a socialist but neither i am capitalist, because with the time i have learned that the monetarist system is the problem of poor life of many people. many people think the money it's the most important in your life but they don't know how is issued by the banks. i know about this topic because i am a Business Manager, and when i saw the program about the money and banking, i remembered that in my first class the teacher said the central bank is the issuing bank for each country and for that reason any bank could be private. i'm going to stop there and tomorrow i am going to talk about the inflation and the power of the central bank

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The Invisible Hand.

If you haven't heard about the invisible hand of the economy, maybe you don't understand the capitalism like a system of control. 
 
I am not a socialist or capitalist, because over time I have learned that the monetary policy of either a capitalistic or socialist economic system can be a problem of poor life of many people cause of poverty. 

Many people think that money is the most important thing in your life, but they don't know how it is issued by the banking system.
 
I know about this topic because I am a Business Manager; and when I had seen a program about banking and finance, I remembered what the teacher had taught in my first class: the central bank is the issuing bank for currency in each country and any private bank is influenced by the monetary policies of the central bank. 

I'm going to stop there and tomorrow I am going to talk about inflation and the power of the central bank.

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The invisible hand.

If you haven't heard about the invisible hand of the economy, maybe you don't understand the capitalism as a system of control.

I am not a socialist, but neither am I a capitalist, because over time I have learned that the monetarist system is the cause of a poor life for many people.

Many people think that money is the most important thing in their life, but they don't know how money is issued by the banks.

I know about this topic because I am a Business Manager, and when I saw the program about the money and banking, I remembered that in my first class, the teacher said the central bank is the issuing bank for each country and for that reason any bank could be private.

I'm going to stop there and tomorrow I am going to talk about the inflation and the power of the central bank.

 

[Good work.  If you are talking about money in general and not a particular amount of money in a situation, then just say 'money', rather than 'the money'.  "Money is important to most people."  "He left the money on the table."]

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somebody can i help me with the correction of the text please

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