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Hi again Hi again! first, thank to everybody that helped me, I still mess with verb conjugations but I try it! Tomorrow, Sunday, I have the last football match of the year, I'm very excited and tired... but more excited haha, and sorry for my "jaja", in Spain we say it this way. I love the football and I'm very rapid, so much! nobody can win me in a race who I know haha. Now I'm working in a easy job, I'm warehouseman, it's simple and I don't work all days, I have so much free days and I earn a lot of money, it's like a dream! I really love the English language, and well, I'm thinking about in do something for internet, to improve my english and for fun, videos, songs, I don't know... maybe... I have a lot of free time now I guess haha. Well, I hope that all I wrote will be fine. Cheers!

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     Thanks to everyone who helped me but I am still a mess with verb conjugations.  
     Tomorrow, Sunday, I have the last football match of the year. I'm very excited but tired -- more excited. I love playing football and I'm very quick, so much so, that no one I know can beat me in a race.
     I'm working now as a warehouseman. It's a simple and easy part-time job, with good pay and a lot of time off, so it's like a dream.
     I really love the English language. I'm thinking about doing something through the internet to improve my English, and with videos, and songs for fun; I have a lot of free time now.
     Well, I hope that all I wrote will be fine.
     Cheers!

Okay, Adryannn. Very good, understandable writing. Consider trying to write your notebook entries with more "directness." The passive "wells" and "maybes" and "Hahas" take-away from the reading. Let your words stand alone. The passive voice is excellent in the fictional story, but when writing facts for language comprehension they may be better left-out. Note how I broke-up your sentences? Just a suggestion. All-in-all very good and please keep-up your practice. Merry Christmas! --Dan

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