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Thanks to everyone who helped me but I am still a mess with verb conjugations.
Tomorrow, Sunday, I have the last football match of the year. I'm very excited but tired -- more excited. I love playing football and I'm very quick, so much so, that no one I know can beat me in a race.
I'm working now as a warehouseman. It's a simple and easy part-time job, with good pay and a lot of time off, so it's like a dream.
I really love the English language. I'm thinking about doing something through the internet to improve my English, and with videos, and songs for fun; I have a lot of free time now.
Well, I hope that all I wrote will be fine.
Cheers!
Okay, Adryannn. Very good, understandable writing. Consider trying to write your notebook entries with more "directness." The passive "wells" and "maybes" and "Hahas" take-away from the reading. Let your words stand alone. The passive voice is excellent in the fictional story, but when writing facts for language comprehension they may be better left-out. Note how I broke-up your sentences? Just a suggestion. All-in-all very good and please keep-up your practice. Merry Christmas! --Dan
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