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How to deal with the relationship between friends who with whom you are not very familiar?
There are mang friends we may meet in our lives. We may meet many friends in our lives.
Some are always kind to you at ordinary normal times, but once you are in danger, or something involves their profits money, then they will keep away from you. Actually, such kinds of friends are abounded in abundance. As for me, I really don't like this kind these kinds of relationships. There is a proverb that goes, a friend indeed is a friend in need "a friend in need is a friend indeed". I'm eager for to have those friends who can share my happiness, feel my pain, travel with me, help me without any hesitation, and accompany me through the hard times. And I will also try my best to ba be sincere to them. However, for those who are hypocritical, I have no patience to pretend to be very close. I dislike hypocrisy. But in society, sometimes, we have to learn to put up with people who are hypocritical. So, what on earth should I do ?
who/whom is difficult to explain, you can look it up!
I removed 'very' to be a stronger statement.
I rewrote the first sentence to sound better.
Words have single spaces between them. Commas always follow a word, then have a space after it, like <word><comma><space><word>. Your comma placement seems random.
'this kind' is singular, but 'relationships' is plural. Therefore, 'these kinds' so the words match.
oops, your proverb is backwards!
What to do? Select your friends carefully, and they will last forever!
How to deal with the relationship between friends who you are not very familiar?
There are manyg friends we may meet during in our lives. Some are always kind to you at ordinary times, but once you are in danger, or something involves their money profits, then they will keep away from you. Actually, such kind of friends are plentiful abounded. As for me, I really don't like this kind of relationships. There is a proverb that goes, 'a friend in need indeed is a friend indeed in need'.
I'm eager for those friends who can share my happiness, feel my pain, travel with me, help me without any hesitation, accompany me through the hard times. And I will also try my best to bea sincere to them. However, for those who are hypocritical, I have no patience to pretend to be very close. I dislike hypocrisy. But in society, sometimes, we have to learn to put up with people who are hypocritical. So,what on earth should I do ?
I will provide you with another proverb, from British writer Norman Douglas: : "To find a friend one must close one eye - to keep him, two"
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